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AC/DC essay help?

LiveWire101
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So in my language arts calss we have to write descriptive essays.....i chose to write about the AC/DC concert i saw in chicago back in 2008. heres the thing it has to be descriptive...he wants it to SHOW not TELL.......im having a little bit of a hard time. any help?
twood10
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I'd try writing about how you felt going in too the building, the buzz in the crowd, and how you felt throughout the gig... and the usual why you felt that way... Think of it as selling something to people they can't see, but by your emotion and excitement will draw them in hook, line and sinker.
suicidehummer
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Start off by describing the intro video (they like when you start off in the middle of the action; anything before the concert is too boring). Then just describe the concert, you could even do a paragraph per song, of course making FTATR the climax of the story.


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